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sup yall this is castro

i bet yall like he dont know how to flow

he just another mc wanna b

but u all know u were once 1 so akknowledge me

to explain wat its like to want wat u cant have

and people sayn u cant rap

i know it makes u mad

so u come bak but ur rhymes are still bad

so u decide to give up and step bak

but u need to forget that

cuz its time to pull out ur verbal gat

and load it wit word play and emotions

maybe even add a few words as big as the ocean

now ur verbal bullets r filled wit the perfect potion

so u pull the triger an watch it hit the man in slowmotion

now he's lose'n

cuz u were the one to shoot him

but dont forget to include him

when ur giving recognition to the people who felt

cuz hes the one that helped u

even though he critisized u and called u a jerk

hes the one that made ur brain work

and now when u spit ur rhymes arent dispencible

cuz ever word has a principle. :cigar:

sup yall can i get some feed back.